Wednesday, September 25, 2013

My Pieces of writing

This is my editing piece of writing

 Blossoming Spectacular

The king proteas head feels as soft as fluffy fleecy wool.Its head has a massive bowl shape with bunch mixtures of colours spread right through it. The incense fragrance smells like a bar of slightly soap scented which has been smothered tinted right through the blossoming flower. The stem looks as thick compact and strong as a metal bar, clutching the hefty bloom, with crimson edged petals surrounding the soft pink inside, Crimson edged Petals with a soft pink inside, Clusters of paddle blade-shaped petals shimmer glisten brightly, The black spotted dotted lime green leaves burst erupt explode with with colour, The king protea It has a tint trace of green amongst the pink infested petals, The rusty eroded looking cup shaped vase holds embraces three glimmering, coloured stained flowers.


 This is my finished peice of writing, 

Blossoming Spectacular

The King Protea’s head feels as soft as fleecy wool.
 It’s head has a massive bowl shape with mixtures of colours spread right through it. 
The fragrance smells slightly soap scented, tinted through the blossoming flower.
 The stem looks as compact and strong as a metal bar, clutching the hefty bloom, with crimson edged petals surrounding the soft pink inside, Clusters of blade-shaped petals glisten brightly and black-dotted lime green flowers explode with colour.
 It has a trace of green amongst the pink infested petals.
 The eroded cup shaped vase embraces three glimmering, stained flowers.

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